Friday, March 19, 2010

comment on JiaYue's blog(post by yuheng)

This is a good summary. The structure is clear by using transition words “firstly”, ”secondly”, ”thirdly”, ”in addition”. The content is clear as well. It displays the main points in the article one by one. At the end of the summary, it shows the author’s opinion.
However, I think in terms of the problems of SRM some of the author’s opinions is missed in the summary. For example the author also said, SRM might lead to the ignorance of coming out new policy on global warming. In addition, the author also mentioned about the uncertainty.
Anyway generally speaking it is a good summary.

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